tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5095653559141470092.post2264137471728559055..comments2008-04-20T11:40:52.484-04:00Comments on Journey of the Scribe: Picking Up the Pace (Without hurting your back)Chrohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07768990128419496674noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5095653559141470092.post-53518873186421514422008-04-20T11:40:00.000-04:002008-04-20T11:40:00.000-04:00Interesting post. Given a choice, I'd read the bo...Interesting post. <BR/><BR/>Given a choice, I'd read the book with Passage 2, though it's hard to care when Joseph gets shot. And all those sentences beginning 'He'...<BR/><BR/>I quite consciously try to give every scene something to keep the reader happy, preferably several somethings (don't know if I succeed) because myself I only ever read for entertainment. I can remember from schooldays how stultifying it is to <I>have</I> to read a boring book. <BR/><BR/>(How do you do those neat flower bullet points?)Lexihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14404818053292364819noreply@blogger.com